October Moon 2021


This was published by me 22 years ago! A local website prompted us to write something for Halloween...I did. It's been re-published on my personal website long ago, and a few times here on my blog. Sit a spell. It has a twisted ending!  And since there is a full moon tonight, and it's October...well, read on....

On this October night, I find myself walking
through the country fields into the forest,
entertaining the thoughts of a costume party I am to attend.

My chiffon gown radiates a silvery blue
It billows ghostlike with the breeze.

Toting my silken slippers in hand for a moment, I walk on.
Through the thin wispy clouds moonbeams guide me toward the trees.
Ahead, the forest entices.
As my foot falls, the sea of grasses yields to my step.
With each stride, down-like seeds from the golden blades
beneath me take flight.
From a distance a dog's barks, echoes back to me.

Now before me the thicket stands.
Into the woods I cautiously trespass. A haunting whisper of wind casts a spell.
Blinded by impending gloom, I stop.
Something's lurking within for the odor of musk I perceive.

As I advance, a faint touch to my shoulder I feel.
Should I continue or should I run and take leave?
I find courage and persevere...
...deeper into the forest I know so well.
Convincingly I say to myself "You know this wood, you've been here before. A hundred times, at least".
Farther I go forward, with my heart racing inside.
That touch to my shoulder....was it imagination or real?

In the pitchy surroundings there's a snap of a dried twig behind me.
I twirl around, gulping breath as I try to find focus.
Through the darkened skeletal branches, red, firey, eyes are piercing through my now chilled flesh.

With undescribable fright, I scream!
I close my eyes and hide them from further viewing with my clenched fists.
Again, with haste, I run away; low pine branches scratch and cut my face.
I breathlessly try to take leave before I am captured.
I glance over my shoulder.
The malevolent eyes...they've vanished!
A hidden rock jutting from the dried pine needles and fallen leaves trips me.
I fall to the damp odorous forest floor.
The fragrance of musty, decaying grasses and leaves permeates, entering my every pore.

From fright perhaps, I don't know, but I lose consciousness, laying nearly face down on the ground.

Then, for maybe what was hours, or just minutes, I am awakened!
A damp warm cloth is wiping across my scored face, bringing me back to reality.
Slowly opening my eyes, I see through my stupor, a white creature, with eyes reflecting red from the night's dim light looking down at my face!

As I labor to rise, the leaves and dried twigs have a muted sound now, and I watch it run from me.
My muddled senses and quiet thudding of hoofbeats tell me it is a horse....yes,white, and ghostly!
As I find balance, I once again hurriedly try to escape the heavy and dangerous canopy that hangs above.
I look up for an assurance of the moonlight to guide me. The glow of the autumn moon is now faint. The color of a ripe pumpkin.
A brisk gust of wind hums through the boughs and I am startled.
I feel deep regret of such a venture on such a night.
Exhausted, I pick up my pace, glancing down to the ground.
My bare feet are streaked with small cuts and covered with my own dried blood.
Leaving this retched place, going back home to its warmth, would be oh so good.
I continue, inhaling and exhaling with a little more ease with each step out of this dreary land. Every sound I hear is magnified in my horror.

At one point, I caught myself thinking...this forest, I don't recall it being so deep, so vast. I must leave this wood, get to the wheat fields, and do it now... get out...and get out fast!

Minutes pass like hours! Moonrays from the orange orb overhead grow darker. The witching hour is near.

Feeling lost and quite abandoned, I cut through the trees at a fork in the forest's growth. Movement of the branches stop...no breeze! Searching for the way out, stillness becomes deafening. I sit on a jagged stump of a fallen oak. Aching. Tears of exhaustion and anxieties drop from my eyes onto my muddied chiffon.

From behind me, deeper into the darkness, I hear a spine chilling scream. With no where to go, but run! I run as fast as my achy legs and bloodied feet can carry me. Out from this terror! As I run, the woods become blacker. Mist begins to fall around me. Dampness.

I was a lost soul.
I knew not where I was.
Then, voices I hear. Happy voices!
Not far from me.
I stop and listen. Yes! I hear them, just over the hill, somewhere near me.
I step up my cantor and traipse on.
Finally, a clearing in the wood.
Now fog settles in of the night, surrounds my soul as I leave the darkness of the forest.
Listening through the misty grayness of night the voices again come to my ear.
With each step, laughter and sounds grow clearer and more distinct.

I must be near town, at last heading to the party!
Through the drizzle, they call me.

An iron gate soon appears through the grayness of the night.
Laughter, human voices. Fun. As I step through the black gate, figures appear! At last! I'm safe. In the company of friends! They know me, for they all call me. Call out my name.
Groups of friends gather 'round.
Their features still not distinct, I feel a warm glow in my heart.

As I begin to retell my tale, some move in closer to listen, to console me.

Then, it hits me. The smell of dead flesh!
This is no party! I've entered a graveyard. Forms now become visible. Friends? No! They're certainly not mine. They're walking dead!
Reversing my steps, I leave in a rush. Some chase after, beckoning me.

The fields are now damp with moisture. Sticking to me as I run. The light from the moon has disappeared with the storm. Black is the night. Thunder rolls in the distance.
What was beauty at dusk, now seems deadly, treacherous.
Blades were shredding my chiffon as I ran. I did not know the direction I headed! Just putting distance between me and the dead, I felt I could survive this.
Lightening flashes close-by.
With the iridescent light from lightning I saw a structure. A house! Within, lights glowed golden through the night, perhaps with it carrying friendship and guidance homeward.
Each step I take takes great effort. I am tired and want to rest.
I want to be home. Safe on such a haunting evening. Behind my own doors.
Perhaps these fine folk will be able to direct me home.
Flashes of lightning again show me the way. Yet, somehow the storm quickly subsides. A calmness in the night. Lunar beams reappear.
My fatigue nearly overcomes me as I step through what was once a wooden gate. I step nearer. The house glows in the darkened night.

Pumpkin orange as the harvest moon.
I collapse when I reach the delapidated steps to the entry door. As I fall onto the wooden slats, I realize the apparitions that seem to float around the house....I look to the moon.
At the house's top cupola, a faint bluish glow flies through the night air.


I awaken in familiar surroundings. I vaguely remember the happenings, though still lingering. I step from my bed, searching for clues. My ivory flesh upon my feet are not scarred, nor any evidence of cuts. My dress, made of chiffon, thrown over the chairback is clean and lacking any torn parts. I search upon my image in the mirror, nothing. Was all this just a dream? Or, did it happen somehow?
Knocking on my door brought me around from my trance.
Mother comes in carrying my silken slippers!
"These were found down by the old graveyard this morning. Dagger, our ol' mutt musta drug them off...." she says as she drapes them over the victorian bedpost.
Last evening was All Hallow's Eve,
with an orange October Moon©....






This was published in 1999 by Anni
All Rights Reserved. 

title graphic and animations free domain clipart

47 comments:

  1. Wow! I thouroughly enjoyed reading your tale of suspense and terror! You are just as talented with your writing as you are with your art! I'm thinking she for sure never made it to that party, unless it was a graveyard bash.

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    1. Thanks Ginny...the story is open for many plots.

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  2. Wonderful I was on the edge of my seat as I read.

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  3. Anni, this story literally had me on the edge of my seat as I read each word. And the ending was STELLAR! This story, unto itself, could be a short movie. So well-written! And I absolutely loved the animated photos (particularly the one of the white horse) because they added to the eeriness.

    Well done! And thanks so much for sharing it!

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  4. WOW!!!!!!!! I was riveted until the last word, Anni!! Good job!! Was it a dream? Or was it real? The reader must decide! ~Andrea xoxoxo

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    1. There y'go. What was your conclusion?

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  5. Spooky! and just perfect for all hallows eve! the illustrations are amazing, love that horse. I am thinking it was an out of body walk in the woods and she dropped those slippers on the way back.. or maybe someones nightmare party... i have to say this story is so you, it is something you would do, go wandering in the woods at night. I am the remain inside the house with doors and windows locked during the dark hours of the night....

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    1. Ya, I wouldn't hesitate to enter!!

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  6. Wow! That is so cool. Another great talent you have. :-)

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  7. What a wonderful story and very suspenseful and the graphics are just wonderful!

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  8. You sure can spin a good story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. full moon spooky! Yikes!

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  9. Okay..now I can breathe again....
    I love the rhythm of your story and how everything builds to the climax.
    Well done and so YOU...
    Creative and talented.
    Sue

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    1. Great accolade, and so appreciated Sue!

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  10. Very cool!!!!!!! But I want more of that gloriously ghostly horse!!!!!! -smile-

    🍁 🎃 🌰 🎃 🍁

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  11. THANKS FOR THE GOOSEBUMPS !

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  12. That was a great story Anni. Kept me riveted right through to the end. You tell a great tale for halloween. glad you republished :) Thank you!

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  13. WOW. Extremely well done and riveting. Though I'd have head for home it at that first touch. Would not want to hear that in the night around a campfire. Really spooky.

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    1. Wonder what those around the campfire would think?!

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  14. I loved your story! Almost a ballad, very lyrical but scary! You can really write!

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  15. That was an awesome tale you created. Very spooky with a good ending.

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  16. That is a great story and I do remember reading it before.

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    1. I didn't realize you have followed me that long. Thanks Karen

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  17. Thank you so much for posting this.
    I enjoyed the read.

    All the best Jan

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  18. What a great story, you are a talented writer. Thanks for sharing.
    Take care, enjoy the rest of your week!

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  19. Oh my, what a tale. I found myself holding my breath all the way through.

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  20. Your such talent person. I wonder if there something you can't do.
    Coffee is on and stay safe

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    1. Thanks! Many things on the can't do list.

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  21. What a story! You are so talented.

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  22. Well Jump Back And Kiss Myself - What A Read - Amazing Illustrations - You Rock Hootin - Big Hugs And Enjoy Your Weekend

    Cheers

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  23. Loved it. Anni. I kept trying to figure it out all through the story. But I was definitely surprised. Kept me reading til the end, as a good write should!

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